Saturday, September 1, 2018

Sacrifice Comments

Rating: 5.0

beat, bellow and decay,
is there nothing more,
cold liquid crimson,
colorful tainting,
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Luke Hobbs
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 September 2019

aptism by fire, cauterized spirit, fresh wounds pass away, clear the dross, to set the stage, away with held breathe, .. fire and spirit and the learning we do. well written poem with fine ideas.tony

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Luke Hobbs 04 September 2019

You are very kind, Dr Tony. Thank you.

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