This was very universal until you got to the last three lines Poly, the 'My men about me', kind of returned it to your personal possession poem and I think, leaving the now out would not hurt either, the tenderness as an ending thought is very good. A strong poem with a good message. Welcome to PH, smiling at you, Tai
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This was very universal until you got to the last three lines Poly, the 'My men about me', kind of returned it to your personal possession poem and I think, leaving the now out would not hurt either, the tenderness as an ending thought is very good. A strong poem with a good message. Welcome to PH, smiling at you, Tai