Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Sacred Was This Longing Comments

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Sacred was this longing; like a flame
Whitehot and purified: flaring towards freedom
Nebulous but euphoric in a mad quest for liberty;
To rebel, to fight and even maybe lose
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Rani Turton
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Mamta Agarwal 06 October 2009

when one takes the road less travelled, even if its a roller coaster ride, its worth it. Sacred was this longing, Rani is very beautiful poem, full of lovely imagery.10 Mamta

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Fay Slimm 06 October 2009

This is quite enthralling and indeed speaks loud with right attitudes Rani - - to get up again after reaching 'rock bottom' takes a special kind of 'sacred longing' - - - you pen this with powerful imagery.....10 + + + Fay

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