Sunday, September 21, 2008

Sacred Silence Comments

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Maybe it looks so strange, sounds absurd.
Still I can't fly, on these legs i've to stand.

Maybe I'm wrong, maybe what you think is right.
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arjun kishtwaria
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nice poem! filled with nice thoughts and phrases......!

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Kesav Easwaran 21 September 2008

good expressive write...the phrases 'try to stand on water' and 'got a right to fall' go very well complimenting each other...ten for you, Arjun...

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