Monday, May 2, 2011

Sacred Places Comments

Rating: 5.0

The gray on my hair
The wrinkles on my face
The crows' feet that won't quit
These are the sacred places of my life.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 16 August 2012

It's been a long time since I visited here but I'm glad I stopped by and caught this poem. As in all your work, your sensitivity speaks through the words. An enjoyable read, thank you June.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2 and vote and comment.

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