Friday, October 24, 2008

Sacred Lust Comments

Rating: 4.5

In my mind i capture and seduce you with the inevitable blashphemy dreams of sex
Lust at our sight dominating our control of the prudent mind,
it's so clear of what this can lead to next
your eyes gazing at me
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janice etienne
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*Trusting You* 07 December 2008

I agree with Saint this is Awesome! ! ! I cant give you enough tens for this one. I love the ending. very well done. you want me but not completly just the love of my physical body the nudity, the fire that burns between my legs I know that feeling. some men only want you for your skin... but there are good ones out there. great job. Becca

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Saint Cynosure 24 October 2008

Janice this is AWESOME 10s across the board...

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Wow very climatic-was this your first love? You write with passion and attention to details.

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