Thursday, November 2, 2006

.sacred Kisses (Couplets) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Early morning mists envelop and swirl
Beneath Smokey’s English topography

By day, she sports a stylish new fall coat
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Debora Short
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 November 2006

YOUR UNDERSTANDING OF PROPER USE OF EXTREME IMAGERY IS VERY IMPRESSIVE...THIS POEM SMACKS OF ALL THAT IS RIGHT ABOUT CONTEMPORARY WRITING''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R

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Duncan Wyllie 02 November 2006

Very tranquil piece, a silence that can seem so rare at times Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X

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