sacred Flame (A Tale Of The Neanderthals) L Comments

A tale in a few poetic lines, which is not just a tale, but history. History how the Neanderthals were systematically eliminated by the "newcomers". But that is how every new species flourished… great work

Beautifully articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful work of art.

Dark, Graphic and thoroughly Captive...Just the way I like poetry to be! Good Stuff, John! ~FjR~

Engaging story told well here. I enjoyed reading it very much. The only thing that bothered me was the two misplaced apostrophes. You should have THE CAVE'S UNSAFE and THROUGHOUT EUROPA IT'S THE SAME. Again, great poem, and congratulations on having it chosen as Poem of the Day!

nice to read you again, John. A well written tale.

Awesome, I'd give that 10 out of 10! !