Monday, July 13, 2009

* Sachet Of My Dreams Comments

Rating: 3.2

I am ready to peel off
The seal
Of my childhood
Sachet of dreams.
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Faran Khalid
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Sameer Ahmed 20 July 2009

Very pensive thoughts illuminated with simli not very much common. The adeptness can lead us towards the fullfilment of our dreams. Well portrayed the pre-productive era of life..

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Mehreen Mujeeb 15 July 2009

beautiful imagery. perfectly composed.

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Surya . 15 July 2009

a beautiful naration.well composed voted10 surya

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~ Jon London ~ 15 July 2009

Life can seem a struggle, and most often is....but it's the game we each play until our passing day...................well penned bro..........keep up the good work

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