Saccharine Comments

Great write. Very nice use of imagery.

In my head this seems to have similarities with your previoys poem. Another entity; possiblny a human person, possibly not (although I like to think it is) . That last poem put through my interpretive magle machine was about the process of somone close bringing the narrator down and this one excites me in that it fits as a continuation of affairs, except that it is explaining how the narrator hides the troubles and woes they have and yearns for some relief but also does not want the close person to know how much they are damaging them. Of course, these people only become close because they are very nice people who mean well (who have a 'delicious' personality) but things can happen in life that can shatter that and it has a big effect on the close circle. I know it's just my interpretation but I think these two poems really work swimmingly together. Ace. Thank you for putting up with my vain imaginings.