Sabotage Comments

Well done on completing your triptych trilogy. This being one to brutally and brilliantly kick it off. Thanks for writing and sharing it with everyone. You have a great imagination which is projected so vividly for me and others to leave us breathless. Thanks again Bryony. And while I'm here I'll rate it again. Would 10++ do? Take care.

Wow! Superb writing and imagination. A real visceral tour-de-force of a powerhouse poem. Love it. And the last with it's delicious pay-off is sublime. Thank you for writing and sharing this gem of a dark poem Bryony.10++ and added to my dark treasure chest. Thanks again.

Your skull smashes against the wheel; Bone fragments through the windshield. Your flesh sticks to the warm leatherette. Your eyes close to your heart's arrest....... death, obsession.... a fine poem full of minute description that goes under the skin........ thank u for writing such poems full of feelings. thank u. tony

A good start with a nice poem, Bryony. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Well thought-out and nicely nicely penned from the heart. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Bryony.

A very passionate poem, pain and hurt sing through.