Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Sab Ko San Mathi De Bhagvan Comments

Rating: 4.4

Among the streams of refugees
He was a boy of nine.
From the winds of Lahore
It was an exile forever.
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Ravi Panamanna
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 23 October 2009

a wonderful narrative poem you bring out the character of the refugee very well..a very touching poem sir

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Chitra - 22 October 2009

deep, profound with a strong message sent out!

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Indira Babbellapati 21 October 2009

a befitting ending to ur engrossing narrative poem

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A wonderful narrative story written with sensitivity and style. A very touching piece of writing indeed. love Karin

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C. P. Sharma 20 October 2009

A great message through pathetic portrait painting of a refugee lady, graceful and serene. Thank you for sharing it. CP

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Surya . 20 October 2009

really a magnificient, meaningful and beautiful poem. voted10 surya

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Surya . 20 October 2009

really magnificient, meaningful and beautiful poem. voted10 surya

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Seema Chowdhury 20 October 2009

very nice and meaningful poem. its very nice to write about these points.

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Sonya Florentino 20 October 2009

it's sad when someone you've counted on to see on a regular basis suddenly isn't there anymore...and learning that they died so unnecessarily multiplies the sadness....

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Catrina Heart 20 October 2009

Such a beautiful and meaningful poem written with great picturesque and simile........loved it! ! ! 10

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Alf Hutchison 20 October 2009

Ravi I am fine thank you and good to be back reading your poetry again... this piece is outstanding... it reminds me so of the shopowners I knew growing up... Regards Alf

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Lady Grace 20 October 2009

BISMILLAH... this piece is nicely done...

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

Excellent narrative poem, very well written...touching..........10++++++++++

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Carol Gall 20 October 2009

great poem about senseless bombings 10

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bye bye... bye bye 20 October 2009

I often wonder, when I see what people all around the world are going through, what makes them go on striving? Your poem is a homage to all these people we read about, not as individuals, but anonymous victims of riots and terror. Very, very powerful reading, Ravi!

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Obinna Eruchie 20 October 2009

'Iswar Allah...Bhagvan*= Lord, you are known as Iswar and Allah. May you give everybody the right kind of intelligence and mind.' Amen to that. May it be so, so that the senseless killing of innocent lives are no more. A touching piece on a wonderful industrious person, who was unfortunately slain in the end.

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Obinna Eruchie 20 October 2009

'Iswar Allah...Bhagvan*= Lord, you are known as Iswar and Allah. May you give everybody the right kind of intelligence and mind.' Amen to that. May it be so, so that the senseless killing of innocent lives are no more. A touching piece on a wonderful industrious person, who was unfortunately slain in the end.

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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