Among the streams of refugees
He was a boy of nine.
From the winds of Lahore
It was an exile forever.
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A wonderful narrative story written with sensitivity and style. A very touching piece of writing indeed. love Karin
A great message through pathetic portrait painting of a refugee lady, graceful and serene. Thank you for sharing it. CP
really a magnificient, meaningful and beautiful poem. voted10 surya
very nice and meaningful poem. its very nice to write about these points.
it's sad when someone you've counted on to see on a regular basis suddenly isn't there anymore...and learning that they died so unnecessarily multiplies the sadness....
Such a beautiful and meaningful poem written with great picturesque and simile........loved it! ! ! 10
Ravi I am fine thank you and good to be back reading your poetry again... this piece is outstanding... it reminds me so of the shopowners I knew growing up... Regards Alf
Excellent narrative poem, very well written...touching..........10++++++++++
I often wonder, when I see what people all around the world are going through, what makes them go on striving? Your poem is a homage to all these people we read about, not as individuals, but anonymous victims of riots and terror. Very, very powerful reading, Ravi!
'Iswar Allah...Bhagvan*= Lord, you are known as Iswar and Allah. May you give everybody the right kind of intelligence and mind.' Amen to that. May it be so, so that the senseless killing of innocent lives are no more. A touching piece on a wonderful industrious person, who was unfortunately slain in the end.
'Iswar Allah...Bhagvan*= Lord, you are known as Iswar and Allah. May you give everybody the right kind of intelligence and mind.' Amen to that. May it be so, so that the senseless killing of innocent lives are no more. A touching piece on a wonderful industrious person, who was unfortunately slain in the end.
a wonderful narrative poem you bring out the character of the refugee very well..a very touching poem sir