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Kitabo ke panno se nikle kuch khwaab hai,
Udaan bharna chahe aise kuch saaz hai,
Dhyn se milti hai usko zindagi,
Par kehne ko hai woh darti,
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Tripsha Ghosh
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Unnikrishnan E S 05 May 2017

Hi Tripsha, Beautiful poem. Wonderfully worded and rhymed. Alfaaz kaee hain band uski aawaz mein, Sunna na chahe kuch dil ki baatein hai, Dhund rahi woh ek duniya, - This is true, quite true about the women all over the world. Jahan pyar aur vishwaas hai, Jahan uski lafzon ko mil raha koi saaz hai.. This is the lines of hope.. Let us keep our hopes alive. Nice poem.Glad you have shared it..100+++

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Tripsha Ghosh

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Noamundi, jharkhand
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