Sunday, July 18, 2010

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The summer, hot, oozing with joy.
I long for the winter..
so it's normal to be a cold, lost, little boy.
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James Enoch
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David Beckham 13 August 2010

Totally agree with Poet Michelle. You have created good poetry here. Thanks for sharing

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Michelle Slaney 18 July 2010

I like this piece! I like how there is a progressiveness of thought in the piece in what the speaker longs for, from a dejected state of mind to a somewhat hopeful tone. I love the personification of summer and winter as well. Well done amigo! Cheers.

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