S.O.S. Comments

lol the last line kinda killed the emotion... we know you're not really dying (or else you won't be posting this on a website) , you don't need to say it. But still a great poem and one that I can relate to. Keep writing! -Cheng

hey yes... I know this feeling.. and your poem says it all.. Hey you express yourself in a very nice, smooth refreshing manner indeed.. I like your emotions here... love shan

You definately know how i feel lol. I like how you put that little thing at the very end about you not really dying. It was funny lol Very nice poem though -Liz

nicely written i feel the same way 110% No Reason To Care