Sunday, August 3, 2008

S.I.C.K. (Stomach Is Constantly In Knots) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I come
Extend your ridicule
Expose me
To the group
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Michael Fischer
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The title I can relate to. The content I can relate to. Standing out from the crowd as ever M... yah boo to anybody who might ever put you down! t x

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Tai Chi Italy 03 August 2008

the title is SICK, which is good in young person speak, or some I am told. The poem expresses our deepest despair in being ridiuculed by our peers. Cowards aways attack when their victim is at their lowest ebb....I have seen it happen many a time, friends, relatives, strangers, it is human nature at it's worst....a product of this Media based 21st Century, kill or be killed. I have had to be a very strong woman in the past 6 years since becomming a widow with three young children. I am a warrior now, partially always was, but now, I got my scars to prove my strength and would stand against anyone who hurt me and mine. Great write. Smiling at you, Tai

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Patrick McFarland 03 August 2008

A breath of fresh air. I give it a ten.

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Michael Fischer

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