Let me keep you in my heart
So we will never part
Allow me to whisper you name
It keeps my feelings aflamed.
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yeah right! ! ! ! i've seen it.... but i haven't read all your poems yet.... i'll make time for it....atleast your thoughts is spreading, it won't get stock in your journal anymore...nice one..! ! ! !
beautiful..don't we all wish that our prince could be with us throughout the night
It is a very sweet poem. I like it. But I am having difficulty understanding the title....unless you were dividing it up into words...she, he, her, wins? I enjoyed the similes and the scenes you painted.
Beautiful and well set.I sense a longing for love and then a love lost.To me you have expressed your soul.It's very short but yet so sweet and comforting and a bit sad.
I love the setting for this love poem. Nature the perfect metaphor for love...so natural. Thanks for sharing
Nice Love Poem in backdropp of Nature, ‘Still I can feel the warm rain’ finest metaphor…is it tears? ....thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Beautiful! Soft, sensual and delicate poem! An altogether lovely read! ; D
Ma'am I mean yung pangalawa sa last hindi po yung last word.............You already change it na pala ^_^
Hi ma'am! ! ! Ganda po ng poem niyo ^_^......yung last part po ba...dreaning ba talaga yun? or dreaming?
A beautiful love poem. 'In the silence of the moment my heart plays a tune The leaves dance the birds sing they smile at the moon.' These things happen when one is in love. The last stanza is simply superb! Well written. What is the meaning of the title?