Wednesday, January 20, 2010

S H E R W I N S. Comments

Rating: 4.8

Let me keep you in my heart
So we will never part
Allow me to whisper you name
It keeps my feelings aflamed.
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Khairul Ahsan 18 December 2013

A beautiful love poem. 'In the silence of the moment my heart plays a tune The leaves dance the birds sing they smile at the moon.' These things happen when one is in love. The last stanza is simply superb! Well written. What is the meaning of the title?

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Bernadette Inocencio 27 February 2011

yeah right! ! ! ! i've seen it.... but i haven't read all your poems yet.... i'll make time for it....atleast your thoughts is spreading, it won't get stock in your journal anymore...nice one..! ! ! !

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Anna Petrashishina 08 February 2011

beautiful..don't we all wish that our prince could be with us throughout the night

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Manonton Dalan 02 December 2010

aron alimatay panaon ya umbangon ed kugip.

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Megan Dickson 04 November 2010

this is a truly heartfelt poem.its very beautiful

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Star Crossed Lady 27 October 2010

it was true but also sad. i enjoyed it.

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Jenny Gordon 20 October 2010

It is a very sweet poem. I like it. But I am having difficulty understanding the title....unless you were dividing it up into words...she, he, her, wins? I enjoyed the similes and the scenes you painted.

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Veronica Gonya 11 October 2010

Beautiful and well set.I sense a longing for love and then a love lost.To me you have expressed your soul.It's very short but yet so sweet and comforting and a bit sad.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 19 September 2010

I love the setting for this love poem. Nature the perfect metaphor for love...so natural. Thanks for sharing

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 September 2010

Nice Love Poem in backdropp of Nature, ‘Still I can feel the warm rain’ finest metaphor…is it tears? ....thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Beautiful! Soft, sensual and delicate poem! An altogether lovely read! ; D

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Shayne De Vera 11 February 2010

Ma'am I mean yung pangalawa sa last hindi po yung last word.............You already change it na pala ^_^

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Shayne De Vera 02 February 2010

Hi ma'am! ! ! Ganda po ng poem niyo ^_^......yung last part po ba...dreaning ba talaga yun? or dreaming?

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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