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Oh this is interesting..the shadow has got a mind of its own and takes the lead instead of just following behind. beautiful and very very different wishing you and your shadow a beautiful evening Pia

What a unique way of looking at a shadow and to bring it to life by giving it a live of its own. I especially like the last lines about being nailed to the cobbles and the echo of your next step.' I really like the fact that it is not her next step but the echo of her next step. I think there is a lot of you in this shadow and you hold the same views about your loved one as the shadow does. A literally off the wall way of writing a love poem and so by directions finding directions out as Polonius put it. Gina XXX

I really liked this poem and its thorough explanation for something so simple that usually goes unnoticed. Good job.