Saturday, October 24, 2015

Ruthie With The Sagging Drawers .... [inspired Poetry; Humour/Humor; Short; Tantalizing! ] Comments

Rating: 4.0

Down the street she swung her luscious hips,
which caused me, an onlooker, to wet my two lips.
It looked like she was going to drop her drawers,
which would have caused, I'm sure, many roars...
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Bri Edwards
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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2015

After many months I am reading a poem of yours and as usual, couldn't check my laughter. Thanks for the notes at the end. 'SIGHHH......of satisfaction' - what was the satisfaction for?

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Kelly Kurt 24 October 2015

They seem to capitalize the t after an apostrophe. I want a poem about that. : -)

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