Rusty Year Retiring Comments

Beautiful New Year Poem Penned// /// Last Years All last years now in rusted retiring now in torn covering now in tattered, shattered, scattered swoon for nothing else Beautiful Sun for beautiful dawn Sun shining for New Year day coming for New Year Resolution////////

A well composed fascinating poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece.....10++++

Wow adeyemi you are good with using words to make a sound and meaning, keep writing

Interesting poem..congratulations

With its clever wordplay and rhyming it makes very interesting reading. Enjoyed reading. Congrats.

Tearing! ! ! Mystic melody! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Interesting use of alliteration...

mystic melody moaning fiery figs feigning voluptuous veils vying.. very fine poem dear poet. tony

Saying bye to 2019 and welcoming 2020. Beautiful...10.