Tuesday, September 12, 2017

Rustle Of Mind Comments

Rating: 3.5

She came, quite long back, into the mind;
It is hard to remember the date and time!
Perhaps, it was in the Jurassic range
The skeleton of the richness in emotion
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2017

This is a beautiful poem on love and life having stunning expression with nice diction. The last lines are imptessive. Let it be quoted... Make me to stand on a mountain peak Wherein, on one side- there is full of darkness With no point-hole for light to come And there is a land-mark on the other Which I feel deeply in the core of my heart. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 15 September 2017

...impressed by your comments! With best wishes and regards.

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