Rustle Of Mind Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Rustle Of Mind

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She came, quite long back, into the mind;
It is hard to remember the date and time!
Perhaps, it was in the Jurassic range
The skeleton of the richness in emotion
Which has been brought with is still lying there.
With burns of stars in the darkness
And with over-burden sand and pebbles
Of the stream of erosion, it got buried.
Even today, it changes its position during Earth Quake
And attracts eyes as it happens to a fossil.

The run of time and the accounts of cortex
Make me to stand on a mountain peak
Wherein, on one side- there is full of darkness
With no point-hole for light to come
And there is a land-mark on the other
Which I feel deeply in the core of my heart.


(Dated: 11-09-2017) .

Tuesday, September 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2017

This is a beautiful poem on love and life having stunning expression with nice diction. The last lines are imptessive. Let it be quoted... Make me to stand on a mountain peak Wherein, on one side- there is full of darkness With no point-hole for light to come And there is a land-mark on the other Which I feel deeply in the core of my heart. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 15 September 2017

...impressed by your comments! With best wishes and regards.

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