Thursday, June 18, 2009

Rustic Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

We sat on the creaky porch- as
Twilight replaced daylight-
Watching the sun warm down in its
slide into the colorful shades of the West.
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 March 2010

‘…This moment- // Illusion of greenness // Explosion of age’ Romance and Love are ageless matchless timeless baseless [not cerebrate] but never tasteless or testless lolol... Age no bar…but puts it behind the bar….excellent diction splurge and splash of nib from a very romantic Poet Ma’am I mean you… 10 [for geriatric smooch] Ms. Nivedita UK

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It is a delightful romantic poem Almedia. You have used senses of smell, scent and sound to create a gorgeous setting. I love the last two lines 'illusion of greenness and 'explosion of age'. 10 Karin Anderson

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Suicidal Magic 26 June 2009

yes very romantic! 'twilight replaced daylight' another amazing piece! i luv reading ur work! keep them coming!

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Saadat Tahir 18 June 2009

hi Alm very romantic and yes rustic but are you sure the date beneath is correct couple o decades here an there ; -) beauty cheers an ten

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Mikayla Carpenter 18 June 2009

This is a truely beautiful poem! One I wouldn't mind reading over and over.: ]

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