Friday, October 7, 2011

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Your name is lost on my lips.
Thoughts of you, written from my finger tips.
Your existence seems to be nothing to me.
To those who know me well.
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Rachel Henley
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Sara Betru 27 May 2015

Its sad but simply beautiful

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Stefanie Fontker 07 October 2011

Your skill seems to improve everyday. You have a real talent, you're going to be big someday. Lovely writing, as always.

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Vipins Puthooran 07 October 2011

I like this poem... It's so wonderfully written... The transition of words is simple and excellent...good poem

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Matthew Rousseau 07 October 2011

I liked this poem so much. I think that sometime the defining quality in poems is the ending, and this was great.

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