Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Rushing Wind Comments

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rushing wind, rushing wind
why in a hurry?
we don't have anymore place to stay
little Sammy wants to play
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Meggie Gultiano
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A terrible thing that this rushing wind has done to your country. Nursery rhymes have been composed from times past, just like this poem of yours depicting events that have happened. Poor children would have lost friends and their homes too! This poem says so much in so few words... love Karin

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Noel Horlanda 31 October 2009

don't rush everything pretty woman...cheers

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Why in a hurry' Rachel Ann Butler

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2009

rushing wind, rushing wind why in a hurry? we don't have anymore place to stay......... lovely poem and susiting to best scene.. i liked it so much.....10 rushing wind rushing wind is there no place you could find? why don't you be gentle and very kind can you go away? if you don't mind little Samy wants to play he has friends like sand and clay why are you angry and in hurry with your speed, it will add to worry......i just added feather to your cap

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Nikunj Sharma 27 October 2009

ha ha...this is hillarious.... wow is the word Let little sammy play and hold the winds at bay.....

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Ency Bearis 22 October 2009

simple but substantial sentiments against the typhoon....10

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Irene Clark-hogg 21 October 2009

A few simple words to express so much worry. My thoughts are with you. Irene

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Ken E Hall 21 October 2009

Very meaningful verse at this point of time The power of natures fury can never be under estimated what with wind fire and rain Thanks for your thoughts regards

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Alf Hutchison 21 October 2009

Our prayers are with you as you people suffer dreadfull loss...Few but very powerfull words Regards Alf

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 21 October 2009

It takes a short time for rushing wind to leave no place to stay and play. I pray the winds stay put for the good of all the people. Thanks for sharing this profound truth with me. A 10

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Carl Harris 21 October 2009

Though a very short, brief poem, Meggie, it says a great deal, especially when one has the knowledge that your islands have been battered by typhoons and are expecting another and perhaps even more devastating one soon. Though not directly expressed in this fine poem, it is the children who suffer most when their home is either flooded or blown away by those accursed winds and rain. Carl.

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Bob Blackwell 21 October 2009

Your short poem has highlighted the plight of many people because of the typhoon, I pray there is an end to it. Surely enough is enough. Love Bob 10++

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Indira Babbellapati 21 October 2009

like how ''ring-a-ring-a-roses' is written when the children were suffering from some form of mealsels became famous, like how 'rain rain...' has become famous, your poem too will catch up with all... my heartfelt sympathies...

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Carol Gall 21 October 2009

tis powerful maggie and the situation is awful my heart to all people espesially the children blessings 10

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Kesav Easwaran 21 October 2009

wind in a fury...well, Meggie...that's touching considering the backdropp of this write...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 20 October 2009

though it sounds like a nursery rhyme...it is a sad plea to god...very well put

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Indira Renganathan 20 October 2009

Very meaningful though it sounds a nursery rhyme as Catrina has put it....thank you

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Catrina Heart 20 October 2009

wow this is such a cute little piece...a fine nursery rhyme here...yet you have pointed out 'we dont have a place to stay'......true and it is since the typhoon have devastated the whole Luzon area and anothet typhoon threatening once again the island..........spare us O God!

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