Saturday, February 16, 2008

Rushing Touch Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

You have opened the window to my heart.
The air is fresh.
And the dew that sits...
Lifts with the dawning Sun.
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Anita Atina 16 February 2008

A beautiful ode to love, a touch of the old world, the spice of the new world, perfectly balanced by Lawrence. Cheers, Anita

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Duncan Wyllie 16 February 2008

This is the best poem I have read by you Lawrence and that is saying something when compared to the rest of your high standard of work You are a true gentlemen a a fine artist There are times after reading your works that, , , , , , I Stand In Awe! This has been one of those times LOVE AND LIGHT Love duncan X

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