Rush Rush Rush Comments

thanks for reminding me that the earth is moving, not the sun.........supposedly. i wonder if the sun gets restless staying in one spot.

Wow! This is so true. Everyone's always in a rush. Maybe I'll slow down a bit after reading this one(lol) . Thanks again for such a lovely insight!

jindagi hai bhagati daurti, har koi dudhta hai apna thikana. life is full of race. in the race of life where there is too rush, we have to achieve the goal of life. indeed nice work.

A wonderfully described day to day life... Nice write :)

This is so true! A couple of days before I tried to play. In the middle of a busy rushing city life, I slowed myself to feel trees, grass, pigeons insects wind, sun, everything that comes natural.. It was a revelation to become one element of the park.. It felt as I almost stopped the time. It is really interesting to feel the outside rush from a own slowed tempo.. Good poem dear friend and filled with truth!

there is something comical but very serious about this poem. Your use of imagery is awesome. It beautifies and solifies the whole poem. Great poem tfs.10/10

Great piece of work! Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

A great thought on the contemporary situation, the whole world is in hurry and it looks the things will sink in this rush. Beautiful i rank it 10

I too think everyone's always in such a rush! This is a well written piece' Rekha! Your insightfulness was certainly exemlpified. I give it 10 marks!

To make up a patch in the pasture of our great land Power mongers always push But the precious Air alone is free from rush

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

push and pull is all, life is all about, leading to rush everywhere.wonderfully depicted. full 10 marks. Narayanan Ramakrishnan

I like this......Life is too much about rushing and i think that is probably true whichever country you live in!