Wednesday, June 23, 2010

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I let myself relax a bit, I breathe in the soft sea air.
Then I feel the gentle breeze blowing through my hair.
I take a few steps backward, then i run and jump and fall.
Flying down the cliff side, I have never felt so free, I see the gentle waves below and my heart skips a beat.
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High on addrenalin! Could feel your heart beating before the jump! Well done, a lovely descriptive poem.; D

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