Friday, December 12, 2008

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Rating: 4.8

I'm walking around with words in my head
I can't wait to sit so I can write them instead
I'm walking around with words that must be read
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Sonya Florentino
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This could almost be a song.. I like the beat i created in my head while i was reading it. You wrote this well ~Krista~

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Izik Alcox 12 December 2008

I like this one, it has great rhythmic flow at the beginning but starts to lose it however the message holds it together nicely, good write

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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