Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Runway Lights Comments

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Those lights aren't just there for comfort,
Or the sign there is safety ahead,
A beacon for the end of a journey,
Putting all kinds of duties to rest
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Tony Elsby (Poems of life and love)
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Adeline Foster 07 June 2011

Tony: This is a good poem and well written. Your metaphors are well chosen. One point I must mention though: the word 'Cause' is an abbreviation of the word 'because'. It should not be spelled Cos. Just a small hint. Adeline

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