Running Wolf Comments

good poem i run track and my teacher told me to find a poem on how we feel about running so thanksss :)))

Wonderful, it is an amazing piece of poetry!

Brings me to a different place in my mind.

Wow! just amazing sir.

very dancing and beautiful

'Because my light and soul I am the reincarnation of you'... wow! how beautifully you compose the wonderful thought. I love it, dear poet.

This is a wonderful poem! It runs with power and truth, it expands the heart to embrace both that power and that truth. It's with humility that I acknowledge you are writing about my American society, or more precisely the indigenous part of it which is Indian, and not white. I have a great belief in the life of the land, that the ground we stand on or run over, is alive, and feeds us with its energy. You have given voice to this belief. And it may just be the redeeming force that will save us from the bleak reality you reveal in your other poem.

Because my light and soul I am the reincarnation of you nice one! thanks for sharing . learn from you!

This is very nice poem, Dave, but I have to agree with what Leslie Philibert said. You should capitalize the proper nouns Running Wolf and Indians. Well written.

A Beautiful poem. You have penned it very well. Loved reading each lines. Thanks for sharing with us. Congrats!

Very nice. I've felt it too.

Good stuff. I think I almost understand it: -)

Well done Dave! Congratulations!

Very good Dave; it makes my mind run wild... just as it should! Peace.

Certainly beautiful words expressed. Thank you and congrats!

Like this, I would capitalise the name Running Wolf, as a proper noun, Indians (not indians) too..

Beautiful poem with a feeling of oneness with others, the essence of spirituality. It has been brought out so beautifully associating with wolf in this poem.Thanks for sharing.

What a good write. I like it. Keep writing

Hello Dave, I really love this poem. The wolf is an animal that provokes fear but has an instinct for survival. well penned. Appreciated!

Great poem! Like the way it ended...