Saturday, February 23, 2008

Running Through Those Veins Comments

Rating: 5.0

Merged in with my scarlet blood,
A thick, black poison seeps silently to the tips of my fingers,
To the creases in my hair and the bruises on my knees,
This lethal mixture makes me feel broken,
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Amber Millar
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Meggie Gultiano 23 February 2008

Amber, this piece of yours conveyed sadness and bitterness, that you wanted to come it out in the open..This is a very deep poem of yours, it shows your talents, your feelings, emotions..This is wonderful, flow of words..i hope i can hug you for real.. just the same, i am sending you my love and hugs.. Love, Meggie

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