Running Race Was Over... Comments

A wonderful poem. u get 10++++++++

light....but deep. this is the way to convey an important message, i guess. 10 to you sir. thank you.

you penned an interesting tale on how the hare wondered on how he was defeated by the tortoise that he had to ask her.

what were the pills made uo of? were they the usual sleeping pills or the psycological pills of over-confidence and ego boost that causes even the intelligent people loose themselves? wonderful, enlightening write, sir.10 from me.thanks

thought put in a way that is only ur unique way of putting in lines...loved it!

Kesav you never cease to amaze me with your clever use of words. No time for sleep here. Wonderful. Bob

As long as the inner darkness spreads out The nightfall masks everything Life knows to deceive at right time Whether one learns the lesson or not Race will be over for sure. Wonderful, i say, dear poet. A strong style of your own shines here. Thank you

you are the poet dear friend, thats really over great, teaching and simple. i liked that

yes this is truth..... a very nice way of conveying your message.

how do you do it Kaesav, these days I am reading Aesops fables and how the lessons can be applied in corporate management. your poem is simple. you need to be smart to outsmart.10 Mamta

Hahaha.......... now isnt this amusing? Beautiful, well though of........ reminds me of the way i write poems, in a story or moral pattern! Great, great- made my day Kesav :)

a very sweet poem sir.......I loved it...10

a joke that leads to believe that life is just a game to play....you make my day.... friend...God bless...hope and pray that this poem will be printed and included in all magazine a 10+++++

Oh this is sooo very sweet and humorous at the same time...... I enjoyed the theme you have given this... Very nicly written, and easy to read and enjoy... Bonnie

haha that was very funny: : 10+ for HUMOR

simple, but a little complex kinda funny good write

You were right this made me smile! ! Thanks for letting me read this 10+ big time! ! !

ha ha ha now...now....why didnt i think of this...........good one sir...

a meaningful poem..beautiful..grace..

A great imagination. You have written it well. Enjoyed.