Tuesday, November 14, 2017

Running Late To Be Early Comments

Rating: 5.0

Woke up so damn late
Knew I was So Late
For early bird date
And she would berate
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Richard Wlodarski
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Rajnish Manga 15 November 2017

Oh! Quite nicely expressed- the woeful consequences of a disturbed routine. Humor that is so natural. Thanks, Richard.

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Richard Wlodarski 15 November 2017

Rajnish, thank you for saying that the humor is so natural!

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Mj Lemon 14 November 2017

Richard, this is brilliant! There is so much humour here, and it really pulls one in. The last few lines....that could hint at something dark. At least, the recent news cycle opens that up as a possibility. One of your greatest!

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Richard Wlodarski 15 November 2017

M.J., nothing dark is intended. But I know what you mean. Thank you so very much for saying that it's one of my greatest!

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Rini. 14 November 2017

Being late and touch of humor, Enjoyed this poem...

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Richard Wlodarski 15 November 2017

I'm happy that you enjoyed the poem, Rini. Thank you!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2017

No tooth paste for teeth No mouth wash for greet No patience to meet The early bird treat... Loved these lines. A beautiful humorous poem shared amazingly.10.

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Richard Wlodarski 14 November 2017

Kumarmani, I couldn't resist those lines! Sometimes, I'll come up with a funny poem. Thanks loving it!

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