Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Running Girl Comments

Rating: 4.5

Horrible past
Hoping for a good future
Tears in her eyes
Running to the preacher
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Try and UnDeRStANd mE ....i promise im normal
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Reetessh Sabrr 01 May 2009

liberation seems to be a long run but yes how long is ur question well put foward

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Mona Martinez 25 April 2009

avoiding is always easy to do but, not facing what you need to face only causes more problems. it's okay to keep running, just know sooner or later. you always going to have face it.

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Serenity Prayer 21 April 2009

good job. i like it. and once again, i am truely sorry.

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Nangula Immanuel 21 April 2009

you are quite the poet! your poems are filled with so much rwa emotin, it touches the reader. WELL DONE! !

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sky dreams 20 April 2009

i like this one.. the way your wrote it made me read it really fast, like a whirlwind of thoughts going through someones mind, and then the last two lines made me sort of stop and bring it all together.. if that made any sense lol... great job on this one!

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hmmm... i like this poem also... keep writing, thanks +10

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