Horrible past
Hoping for a good future
Tears in her eyes
Running to the preacher
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avoiding is always easy to do but, not facing what you need to face only causes more problems. it's okay to keep running, just know sooner or later. you always going to have face it.
you are quite the poet! your poems are filled with so much rwa emotin, it touches the reader. WELL DONE! !
i like this one.. the way your wrote it made me read it really fast, like a whirlwind of thoughts going through someones mind, and then the last two lines made me sort of stop and bring it all together.. if that made any sense lol... great job on this one!
hmmm... i like this poem also... keep writing, thanks +10
liberation seems to be a long run but yes how long is ur question well put foward