Sunday, October 16, 2005

Running Backpressure Comments

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Trot, trot, slap, slap, trot, trot, slap, slap
lone highway, it is hot
and lots of inner strength on tap
a marathon it's not.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 17 October 2005

LOL....I got a kick out of this Herbert! Very colorful!

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Mary Nagy 17 October 2005

A very funny one! Seems you and Jerry have a common problem these days. Cute poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Jerry Hughes 17 October 2005

Sounds a bit like a brewery horse with a stomach full of oats, backfiring. Very graphic, Herbert!

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 16 October 2005

Nice poem, Herbert.5th stanza, 'thunderbolt shot out' and your 'wink' made me laugh. I could See you run! Well written. Thank you.

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