Wednesday, June 21, 2006

Running Away From Me... Comments

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A poem I wrote a month ago.
Took me about a half hour to write,
but then it went through the polishing stage, and here it is.
Hope you like it.
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Ronan Gough
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Chantelle Clark 21 June 2006

This poem is very true but it is also Ironic, we are chasing or trying to keep up with something that is artificial but yet it still runs our days. Time is a very universal thing, it is always going always, its kinda creepy if you think about it. But hey most things are. Nice poem although I think the title maybe should have No Time because if your trying to catch up with it and it keeps passing you by then its not there, and then again it is. (does that make any sense lol) Anyway very good poem.

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Nalini Hebbar 21 June 2006

very very true..ronan...why dont you change the name? ...let there be no TIME in the title...you then retain the catch till the end...lovely poem...your first?

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