Wednesday, August 6, 2008

Running Comments

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She runs until her feet feel numb with pain
Until the anger buries deep within herself
Until the tears are hidden behind eyelashes thick
And the past is left upon the highest shelf
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katie williams
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Anjali Mandokhot 06 August 2008

the pain is well expressed in each and every word of the poem......every bit of it tells the tale of sufferings in the past life......well written...but please correct some speelings like tear is written as 'tares her up'.... keep sharing wishes anjali

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