! ! ! Rungs Of Quest! ! ! Comments

This has a very epic tone. I like it, nice work!

Once again i feel your poem is observing nature for personal awakening and the 'rungs of quest' are a climb towards spiritual enlightenment.

Once more showing love. Great description of you are in the jungle and I think you're going to the side of the sea. The expression you made give me an image of your poem and it's so vivid. To me this poem seem that you're escaping from something during the night since light won't be seen in the jungle. I don't know if I'm right, but it seem that this poem is about escaping violence like wars, and the only way to escape is through the jungle of night. Very great, great poem, so vivid when I read this, I give this a 10! ! !

wen green starts grining...n silhouette starts talking then....it signals that.....heaven is here....... so many colors..in ur poem... thanks i felt like i am in heaven....wat a beauty it has...hats off.......gr88888

This description of nature has not to envy anybody anything. This author learnt from Eliot and surpassed the Simbolists. The quest is not yet over, more or less Freud would say.

scientist's view of looking at nature is unique..

your style is great...I love how you fill the senses in every poem. thx Heath

This is a lovely poem, love reading it.

oh my! ! ! ! ! ! ! you make such deep and lovely poems..what a talent! ! ! ! so glad to be able to read them..

Thought provoking work. Well done for a perfect piece.

What a riviting poem! ! ! The wording and flow jsut leaves me breathless.

The choice of words, the diction, all were in perfect blend!

Very well crafted, fantastic imagery, and lovely and flowing syntax that takes the reader on very nice quest...I loved it! Cheers, Thomas K

the flow of ur thoughts captures my mind...and carries me along the quest! expression solid and diction excellent! loved ur creation.....!

a different realm a different level of creative acumen

superb manifestation of your rhymic ways of writing great poem. Thanks for sharing, a 10 for this Sir. thanks, melvin

Excelent penning, Dr, Thank you for sharing

Another well written piece...love the use of colours throughout it....thank you...

A lot of images painted on the page.

I really like this poem, it VERY well written.It seems like you are a very good poem writer, keep up the great work: D