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Rating: 4.7

RUNE OF SHADOW

at this dead of night, rain sizzles
it seems pitch darkness all around
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Raven Bishop 16 June 2009

Talks about the things that come out after dark. Nice dark depth to it for the vampire in you. Great for the madness that's all around. This should be the thyme for all war films.

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Ritty Patnaik 14 June 2009

enveloped in sadness this poem brings out the real you.thanks for the invite to read it. rittypatnaik

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DaNa XxX 13 June 2009

hey subhendu, i also liked this poem..! its really nice...well done. ^_^

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Linda Moore 13 June 2009

Such a saddness felt in this writing, anguish, blood oozes out from its anchor, the heart is broken....10 wonderful work

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Ally Rose 12 June 2009

i cant comprehend it completely but it is veru profound and pretty

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Thanx for your mail. Your poem is very nice, I must say fantastic but frankly I am yet to comprehend 100%.

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Francesca Martin 12 June 2009

You are wonderful with creating imagery and your word-choice is interseting and effective. Thank you very much for the invite to read this poem

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Kristina B; Williams 11 June 2009

thanks for the invite.i read rune of shadow.thought it was soul piercing.10 all the way....and yeah i do invite you to read my poems too, and would greatly appreciate any feedback

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Elsa Bennett 11 June 2009

I like this poem also. I think some of the imagery you've used is fantastic: 'rain sizzles'/'hurriedly dashes with hunger'... thankyou for sharing.

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Lucero Flores 10 June 2009

I am speachless I give this a 10+++ wow, you need to help me in my poems because mine are nothing compared to yours

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Ken E Hall 08 June 2009

You carve the words out of darkness and place them on the pages of knowledge to instill the mind...thankyou+++++10 regards uavanice1

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Ency Bearis 08 June 2009

a deep thoughts of incantation of the mysterious shadow well implied....

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 June 2009

Hello Suhendu Two excellent poems you have written here to add to your outstanding collection the votes and the comments you receive says more about you than any words can ever say, your originality and genius shines through in all of your poems 100 all of the way to you as usual. F Duggan

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Mitrofan Matei 08 June 2009

i enjoyed reading this poem. the title says it all. the shadow means something dark, lost, dead and rune, in my opinion, appeals to a magical thing that only the poet understands and he shares the meanings through their poetry. this is the opinion of a 13 old boy

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your poem explains many emotions, and what it's like to expierance them through your eyes. i love the creativity with your words and how it all flows together

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Whoa. I must admit, I'm a little confused, but I LOVE the imagery, especially the last part! Great poem!

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Louis Rams 07 June 2009

WHAT I SEE IS THE RAIN CLEANSING THE SOUL A BEAUTY AND WONDER TO BEHOLD. GREAT WRITE A TEN

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Kimberley Kerry 07 June 2009

wow it's really, itruiging, i really enjoyed it, however it was very gorey, which i liked but, painting serious images, 10.

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Thomas Courtney Iii 05 June 2009

Hi. Really enjoyed your poem. Deep and rich in imagery and potent with life. Very exciting actually. Thanks. Tom Courtney

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Oliver Coleman 02 June 2009

You do seem to know how to make words sing,10 out of 10

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