I want to walk the other side
Have others taste the tears I've cried
This need in me will not subside
So to the dark I run and hide
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I agree with Grey Ter.....great write man......Lekkeer dave
Dark though this is its well written with good flow and also fascinating piece of poetry.
You are just getting so good tiyler, you describe how most poets feel far too much of our time, just remember you are not alone and these feelings of despair will lift. Here take this breath of me I send...whoooooooooooosh! There now? Grinning at you,10 from your friend, Tai