** Run & Run & Run ** Comments

PERFECT! this written so well I realy liked the ryhme and the meaning

nice one.it has the nice rhyme also shows your feeling.it really impressed me.

I believe that you are sacrificing the poetic feelings for the rhyme and the sound of your poems. You should find a balance between them.

It chased me too.Your diction, the flow, have a particular effect that makes to think.Nice! --Seagull In D Sky.

you never wanted to share your concept of your creation with any other gods or worshippers your book isn’t burned it was never written Great my little enlightened poet

Run and Run, your words chasing each other and it sounds good one! Keep on writing and u should try doing original write more besides translation too! _Unwritten Soul

not bad! it could be much better than this anyway i am proud that my countrywoman is here!