Sorrow;
Is a mill
Going round and round
With a lot of blood.
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Adjectives of quality for factors pitted against each other delivered like a crescendo.I appreciate the mills going round and round -its my reading going round and round with my vision and it deserves reviewing...a good write
Well i so admire yor poetic mill! I tink anyone with no muse cud get his mind in a windmill of muses inspired by dis impressive poem. I esp likd yor creative line of death being a riddle.