Run Comments

Love it. I can see it came from the heart. Really meaningful poem.

There is no hidden meaning this poem it hits you like a two by four in the face it is an excellent write. Starting with The great Chiracahua and the noble Jim Thorpe, you really put forth a great work Smoky. Definitely a ten, congratulations.

I think you will find, that once you're in control, life is not a race. And then I mean in control of yourself, and not of others. 'Cause once you're in control of yourself, everything in life will be up to you, not to others. That includes things you want to achieve or obstacles you want to surpass.