Tuesday, June 17, 2008

Rumours Comments

Rating: 5.0

They say that your hair is going grey
That you are alone today;
Nobody knows where you go to
When you go away
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Rani Turton
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Kiran Raza 16 July 2008

you are amazing at bringing up creative ideas keep up the good work! ! ! : -)

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Tia Maria 12 July 2008

Rumour has it - you tell the tale of many a poet.... this really really got me, you are very good at revealing the inner angst

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~ Jon London ~ 01 July 2008

As many people fall victim to the hurt caused by Rumour...it doesn't really matter as most people make up what they don't know......seeing is believing truth stands out the illusion quashed.........excellent piece as always with your work 10+ best wishes Jon.

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Flora Gillingham 01 July 2008

Rumours are full of danger, aren't they? Perhaps we should only believe what we see for ourselves. Good poem, Rani. Fx

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Katherine Wiley 01 July 2008

Rani-A very sweet, melancholy verse. It drew me in at once, and all the way through. nice work. Kate

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Kesav Easwaran 21 June 2008

'...you rarely smile rumours say its been a long long while....' here the construction is very good... at times rumours become facts and facts are retold as rumours...a sincere write...10

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Sadiqullah Khan 19 June 2008

these are the old songs which are our favourite, , , keep going rani, , , exellent write

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Broken Peaces 19 June 2008

As usual deep and full of meaning 10 Chris

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 18 June 2008

so heartfelt song, thanks for sharing 10

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