Sunday, April 6, 2008

Rumour Comments

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The wind bumpy,
Running down to me
Very secretly
Mused into my ears
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Kesav Easwaran 20 September 2009

yes; a woman, Sonya...you seem to know well! Thanks

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Sonya Florentino 20 September 2009

hmmm, me thinks the wind was the woman, right? ;)

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wind, gentle seashore, sea and the waves...a dancing picture in this beautiful poem

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Catrina Heart 30 March 2009

Magnificent composition in here. Great metaphors, every verse were meaningful...words goes to the wind with half truth half lies, in anger or in love...Though my gentle breeze always send wishes of thanks and love to all...; 0)

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Shimon Weinroth 29 November 2008

rumour that most decietful jade too often entices us, well versed 10+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

A nice piece, love it.

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Chitra - 09 July 2008

a very impressive poem

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Kesav Easwaran 02 May 2008

not a meddler indira! ...for sure...

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Indira Babbellapati 02 May 2008

battle bet. the wind and the sea n ke in the middle!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 April 2008

the annoyed sea and angry winds has landed on a succumbed shores. well rumors has it all..........unleashed rumors are poisonous. well written kesav.

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Sarah Abdullah 12 April 2008

the scene you painted here is Completely Perfect Thx for writing it ^_^

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Deepti Agarwal 09 April 2008

BEAUTIFUL is the word i can say for yr work :)

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Kesav Easwaran 06 April 2008

i liked the way aabha put it... for it had a metaphor in it... but that metaphor, usha, ... you only enunciated it!

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Usha Pisharody 06 April 2008

Well Abha has put it across so beautifully... You have composed it, and she has enunciated it :) Me? I'm delighted with this lovely poem! Thank you! Very uplifting! !

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Abha Sharma 06 April 2008

So the wind after all was successful to recite the account of the neighborhood….this wild wind is very wayward… ……So spot on a human trait………… The metaphor is too good, solid brain work, well composed by an expert poet. Enjoyed reading this…

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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