The wind bumpy,
Running down to me
Very secretly
Mused into my ears
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wind, gentle seashore, sea and the waves...a dancing picture in this beautiful poem
Magnificent composition in here. Great metaphors, every verse were meaningful...words goes to the wind with half truth half lies, in anger or in love...Though my gentle breeze always send wishes of thanks and love to all...; 0)
rumour that most decietful jade too often entices us, well versed 10+
the annoyed sea and angry winds has landed on a succumbed shores. well rumors has it all..........unleashed rumors are poisonous. well written kesav.
the scene you painted here is Completely Perfect Thx for writing it ^_^
i liked the way aabha put it... for it had a metaphor in it... but that metaphor, usha, ... you only enunciated it!
Well Abha has put it across so beautifully... You have composed it, and she has enunciated it :) Me? I'm delighted with this lovely poem! Thank you! Very uplifting! !
So the wind after all was successful to recite the account of the neighborhood….this wild wind is very wayward… ……So spot on a human trait………… The metaphor is too good, solid brain work, well composed by an expert poet. Enjoyed reading this…
yes; a woman, Sonya...you seem to know well! Thanks