Monday, January 14, 2019

Rummager Comments

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broken on the rocks of your disapprobation
where did you get the right to rummage in my head.
decide what is good or bad and judge
in cold and calculated stance, who I am.
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Andy Brookes
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bri edwards 15 January 2019

this is a new word to me: dis·ap·pro·ba·tion strong disapproval, typically on moral grounds. of course many people in my life have felt such towards me, ....i'm sure! ! ! WOW! such DIFFERENT definitions HERE: {i'll assume you mean def. # 2} an·i·mus 1. hostility or ill feeling. 2. motivation to do something. to MyPoemList. my main 'suggestion' is: use nor, not not at start of last line. bri :) i esp. enjoyed rummage in my head

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