Wednesday, November 22, 2006

Rummage Bag Raf Comments

Rating: 5.0

Form the bottom of the rummage bag,
Buried under assorted pendants and brooches,
Their chains all muxed up like a bird’s nest on a fishing reel
(and I’ve had a few of them in my time!) ,
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Tony Jolley
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Fay Slimm 03 November 2008

A good and telling tale of the find, and of the poet's interpretaion of the might-have -beens, Tony - and you took us well into the fears and frights of the youngsters who had to be oldsters before their time. Those days were indelibly pinned to many a heart. thank you for the reminders. ...... from Fay.

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Tailor Bell 22 November 2006

a grand verse and marvelous journey...filled with heartfelt moments. fine work, Mr. Jolley. -Tailor B.

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Tony Jolley

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