An amazing thought
A seemingly made up dream,
The daily occurence of life and death -
Just one more passing, perhaps a bit depressing,
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I enjoy the ones like this, where you explore deep topics. It is amazing how we live for a short while, and then nothing remains down here; we are more insubstantial than air at our cores..
When you remind me of everyone who's ever lived and died it really puts the insignificance of life in ones face. Your poem's very profound. Thankyou