Monday, January 27, 2020

Rumblings Beyond Comments

Rating: 5.0

Palm trees stand erect
Motionless deep meditate
Beyond rumbling leaves...
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 February 2020

Three brilliant lines that capture the wonderful attributes of Palm Trees. Compelling imagery.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 January 2020

A lovely allegory, meditation despite the rumblings of the world around.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 January 2020

Yes. Allegory and symbolism. I love them both. And metaphor also. Ancient Indian poets are the ever time masters on allegory and alliteration. Thank you very much. Erudite feedback. Liked

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 January 2020

Romance of nature! ! ! Trees obeying natural laws. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 January 2020

Yes. They are under the control and influence of Cosmic Trance. Good comment Edward! Thanks

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Kostas Lagos 27 January 2020

An excellent haiku Kesvan

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Kesav Easwaran 28 January 2020

Yes indeed so, Kostas. I always use minimum words to maximize my expressions. Thanks a lot. Glad my haiku impressed you

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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